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Yo, yo
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I've always liked your work, and I think the shorter length fits you better. I really have no other critisism then what people have said above, but I'll be reading and I'll check in every couple posts with what I did and did not like.

I find my favorite stuff about your writing is that is feels real. From the raven flask to Sakura singing and dancing in her room (thats who I guess it is) I always get enraptured by the realism and the vivid mental pictures I get out of your writing.
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Yo, yo - by Hellfighter 17 - 06-20-2006, 09:55 PM
Yo, yo - by Jinpo - 06-20-2006, 10:00 PM
Yo, yo - by Hellfighter 17 - 06-20-2006, 10:01 PM
Yo, yo - by Ander - 06-21-2006, 11:39 AM
Yo, yo - by Hellfighter 17 - 06-21-2006, 07:08 PM
Yo, yo - by Yamu - 06-21-2006, 07:15 PM
Yo, yo - by Hellfighter 17 - 07-20-2006, 04:18 AM
Yo, yo - by Hellfighter 17 - 07-25-2006, 02:01 AM
Yo, yo - by Aero - 07-25-2006, 02:20 AM
Yo, yo - by Ander - 07-25-2006, 08:23 AM
Yo, yo - by Hellfighter 17 - 07-27-2006, 02:45 PM
Yo, yo - by Old Janemba - 08-02-2006, 03:50 AM

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