06-21-2006, 07:15 PM
I've always liked your work, and I think the shorter length fits you better. I really have no other critisism then what people have said above, but I'll be reading and I'll check in every couple posts with what I did and did not like.
I find my favorite stuff about your writing is that is feels real. From the raven flask to Sakura singing and dancing in her room (thats who I guess it is) I always get enraptured by the realism and the vivid mental pictures I get out of your writing.
I find my favorite stuff about your writing is that is feels real. From the raven flask to Sakura singing and dancing in her room (thats who I guess it is) I always get enraptured by the realism and the vivid mental pictures I get out of your writing.
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Dante's Abyss 2007 Runner-Up

