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Rate the Roleplay Above You
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07-25-2006, 09:08 AM
You used a few too many adjectives here and there, which gummed up the reading considerably. Beyond that, there were quite a few misspellings and such, which are never good things. Not too shabby, but could use some polishing. I'd say maybe a 5.

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Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Burter Jr - 11-23-2005, 02:13 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Piper Juunanagou - 11-23-2005, 02:16 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 11-23-2005, 02:58 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Burter Jr - 11-23-2005, 03:03 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 11-23-2005, 04:19 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Rose - 11-23-2005, 05:08 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Claire - 11-23-2005, 05:13 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Rose - 11-23-2005, 05:15 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Hellfighter 17 - 11-23-2005, 06:51 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 11-25-2005, 01:16 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Burter Jr - 11-25-2005, 02:23 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Burter Jr - 11-25-2005, 02:29 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Hellfighter 17 - 11-25-2005, 02:32 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 11-25-2005, 02:47 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Burter Jr - 11-25-2005, 03:22 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 11-25-2005, 12:31 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Piccolo Daimoun - 11-29-2005, 02:18 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Piccolo Daimoun - 11-29-2005, 02:23 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 01-25-2006, 02:21 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Kazuya - 01-25-2006, 03:53 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Broli - 01-25-2006, 04:49 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Belle Hibiki - 01-25-2006, 07:49 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Kazuya - 01-25-2006, 12:32 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Kazuya - 01-27-2006, 07:35 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Piccolo Daimoun - 01-27-2006, 01:49 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 02-15-2006, 08:42 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Kazuya - 02-15-2006, 08:52 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 02-22-2006, 03:35 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by The Terminator - 02-28-2006, 06:54 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 07-25-2006, 09:08 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Kaden - 07-25-2006, 04:08 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by CoolSpice - 07-25-2006, 04:58 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Burter Jr - 07-25-2006, 05:12 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by CoolSpice - 07-25-2006, 06:04 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by CoolSpice - 07-25-2006, 07:00 PM

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