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Just read it. Awesome.

I love how you blend in comedy, and manage to do it, without disrupting the action.

I haven't really seen any grammar errors.

I also love the story. Not much more I can say. =)
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RPsville - by Sage - 08-09-2006, 03:07 AM
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