08-11-2006, 07:59 AM
Just read it. Awesome.
I love how you blend in comedy, and manage to do it, without disrupting the action.
I haven't really seen any grammar errors.
I also love the story. Not much more I can say. =)
I love how you blend in comedy, and manage to do it, without disrupting the action.
I haven't really seen any grammar errors.
I also love the story. Not much more I can say. =)
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A decade ago, I never thought I would be, at twenty-three, on the verge of spontaneous combustion. Woe-is-me.

