08-11-2006, 08:29 AM
http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...20573&sid=
Okay, so I request C&C please on the above link.
I'm trying to change styles, so tell me what you think of:
Character Development, Plot, New Style, Grammar, Comic Character, Dramatic Character, Quick changes between the two, and anything else you think I did well/could improve on.
Pleasee and Thank You.
EDIT by Bardock: Cleared
Okay, so I request C&C please on the above link.
I'm trying to change styles, so tell me what you think of:
Character Development, Plot, New Style, Grammar, Comic Character, Dramatic Character, Quick changes between the two, and anything else you think I did well/could improve on.
Pleasee and Thank You.
EDIT by Bardock: Cleared
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