Round 1 - Reijin vs Puar

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Originally posted by Puar
You did good Reijin. You earned it.

And thanks for the comments guys. I came into this knowing I would have to kick it up a notch, just, I didn't know Reijin would even find it necessary to. The better writer won, but, I think I improved a bit from this RP.

I thoroughly enjoyed your post and I definately think that if it wasn't for the random series of ideas (the backstory) that popped into my head, you definately would have pulled me out there. Your word useage was great, and the writing had a fairly bleak feel.