08-18-2006, 04:06 AM
I think Spice had a nice idea, but he didn't execute it too well and he took a few things too far.
Rad's didn't seme the most original, but that's probably because because he felt more comfortable with his, and it shows. Very nicely done. The use of ellipses was perfect. A lot of people would have overdosed on them in that situation, but you used them just right, especially considering most people I know don't use 'em too much in writing with a pencil or pen (and don't say yer guy used a marker).
Rad's didn't seme the most original, but that's probably because because he felt more comfortable with his, and it shows. Very nicely done. The use of ellipses was perfect. A lot of people would have overdosed on them in that situation, but you used them just right, especially considering most people I know don't use 'em too much in writing with a pencil or pen (and don't say yer guy used a marker).
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