08-28-2006, 01:38 AM
Alright, as the one that sparred you, I can tell you some stuff about your writing.
The writing itself is compelling. You manage to keep it interesting, realistic, and clever. My only complaint - you tend to write in huge chunks. That turns people away. Break up your stuff into smaller paragraphs, and it'll do wonders. Trust me.
=)
The writing itself is compelling. You manage to keep it interesting, realistic, and clever. My only complaint - you tend to write in huge chunks. That turns people away. Break up your stuff into smaller paragraphs, and it'll do wonders. Trust me.
=)
"Maria..."
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"...my star...'"
"...my star...'"
Quote:frickinegg 4:46 pm
To me, the thread is less about criticizing/defending Avatar and more about wondering how stoned Jack was when he saw the movie/made the thread.