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09-06-2006, 12:43 PM
Just plain old "skinny" would probably do well instead of "string-like".

And soot covered needs a hyphen, so it's "soot-covered". In general I like it.

Beware the return of the Grammar Nazi!

Bardock got to it first though =(
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School project. - by Veritas - 09-06-2006, 02:45 AM
School project. - by Aiden - 09-06-2006, 03:17 AM
School project. - by Ander - 09-06-2006, 04:36 AM
School project. - by Treius - 09-06-2006, 12:43 PM

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