What on Earth?

[Android-18]

I'm going to have to decline your training.

As I read through it, I noticed that some of your posts were horribly small. Some were full of nothing but dialogue. One post was more images than writing. You improved near the end, but overall you just didn't write as much as you could have.

At first glance, seeing how long you've been working on it, and that it was two pages, it looked sound. However, the writing itself was lacking.

I can't say how many posts, or how long, or how detailed. You just need more, that's all I can really say.

You can get another staff members opinion, but that's where I stand. Feel free to try again, though.