09-15-2006, 06:23 PM
Vi: nice inclusion of personal history and dialogue. very nice work with the setting as well.
Mura: i only looked at your last post for the CC (since that's the link you offered) but it wasn't bad. You are one of the better writers here though, in my personal opinion, and so that last post was a dissapointment to be honest. It was well written, but it was just too short to really critique.
Corn: I liked the scene and what you did with it. Good length and well written.
I'd like some CC on my first post, my second wasn't very good in my opinion because I've just been uncertain about where to go with my character in the saga. My post is about 2/3s down on the following page:
http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...r=0&page=5
Mura: i only looked at your last post for the CC (since that's the link you offered) but it wasn't bad. You are one of the better writers here though, in my personal opinion, and so that last post was a dissapointment to be honest. It was well written, but it was just too short to really critique.
Corn: I liked the scene and what you did with it. Good length and well written.
I'd like some CC on my first post, my second wasn't very good in my opinion because I've just been uncertain about where to go with my character in the saga. My post is about 2/3s down on the following page:
http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...r=0&page=5
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All things are subject to interpretation whichever interpretation prevails
at a given time is a function of power and not truth.
-Friedrich Nietzsche