PCIII Official C&C

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Originally posted by Jeice
Celipa: Other then the last few posts being short, i think you're doing a good job. keep up the good work.

http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...21391&sid=

someone tell me how I'm doing?

I assume you want C&C on the first one?

Well, I myself like detail. You have a lot of talking going on, and not that that's a bad thing, but I felt it could have used more of a personal touch. It would have been nice to see more depth in your character, his thoughts and feelings, and stuff. I love detail, and it just seemed like it could have used more.

You are doing well though. I myself tend to focus more on Eighteen than those in my group, otherwise I may RP them wrong or seem like I'm not RPing myself. Because there are so many people in that RP it seemed a bit thrown together.

Still good RPing.

http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...post270486

If anyone would like to C&C that.