09-19-2006, 04:49 AM
Just wanted to say to Jeice: the dialogue lacked character. I couldnt tell when Turles was talking as oppossed to Jeice talking... it all seemed the same. Giving Jeice a specific voice and drawl will go a long way. Rad has 'tch', Bojack has the phrase 'pig-fucker' (I lub it). These are two of my favorites because I know they have stuff going on in their posts that nobody else has going on. Thats style.
Krillin, thanks for the compliment. Unfortunately that link is 404.
Krillin, thanks for the compliment. Unfortunately that link is 404.
Quote: "for a quarter million a year growing weed, i'd fucking be gay. with dick on the side." - Laura, on mairjuana

