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PCIII Official C&C
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09-21-2006, 01:54 AM
Krillin - I thought it was pretty well detailed. I thought it lacked some vocabulary just to make it "look" better.

Sorry, I'm not much for C & C. Never was. =(

http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...21569&sid=

I skimmed through it so I know there is some parts where I messed up. Grammar and spelling isn't really my concern, but one thing I noticed I messed up accidentally is where I was describing the vegetation when I actually meant my aura. I obviously was doing another sentence and decided to change it. So don't be too harsh on me =O! I was kind of in a rush to get it up before Bido made his introduction post.

Edit: I was looking for the second post of mine to be judged. Not the introduction
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PCIII Official C&C - by Ander - 09-15-2006, 08:22 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Kazuya - 09-15-2006, 08:26 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Jewtastic - 09-15-2006, 08:32 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Treius - 09-15-2006, 04:57 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Aqua - 09-15-2006, 06:23 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Jewtastic - 09-15-2006, 06:26 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Aero - 09-15-2006, 07:20 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Aqua - 09-15-2006, 07:42 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Sullivan - 09-15-2006, 09:46 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Veritas - 09-17-2006, 02:24 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Burter Jr - 09-17-2006, 02:26 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Claire - 09-17-2006, 02:34 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Veritas - 09-17-2006, 04:50 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Jewtastic - 09-17-2006, 09:59 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Veritas - 09-17-2006, 04:33 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Piper Juunanagou - 09-17-2006, 05:01 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Sage - 09-17-2006, 06:55 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Veritas - 09-17-2006, 07:42 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Alexander Trafford - 09-18-2006, 03:57 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Veritas - 09-19-2006, 03:31 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Jack - 09-19-2006, 03:35 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Jonathan Meer - 09-19-2006, 04:18 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Jack - 09-19-2006, 04:21 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Jonathan Meer - 09-19-2006, 04:23 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Veritas - 09-19-2006, 04:27 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Jonathan Meer - 09-19-2006, 04:35 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Jack - 09-19-2006, 04:49 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Vejita I - 09-21-2006, 01:54 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Jonathan Meer - 09-21-2006, 05:38 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Veritas - 09-21-2006, 09:18 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Vejita I - 09-21-2006, 11:33 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Alura - 09-24-2006, 03:46 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Veritas - 09-24-2006, 06:46 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Veritas - 09-25-2006, 02:49 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Jonathan Meer - 09-25-2006, 02:55 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Veritas - 09-25-2006, 02:57 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Jonathan Meer - 09-25-2006, 02:58 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Jewtastic - 09-25-2006, 08:32 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Aqua - 09-25-2006, 10:14 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Veritas - 09-25-2006, 10:31 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Rem-13 - 09-28-2006, 01:01 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Aqua - 09-28-2006, 10:26 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Treius - 10-08-2006, 07:12 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Sage - 10-09-2006, 05:32 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Treius - 10-09-2006, 06:33 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Veritas - 11-07-2006, 04:19 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Jonathan Meer - 11-07-2006, 04:53 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Veritas - 11-07-2006, 04:57 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Jonathan Meer - 11-07-2006, 05:50 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Aqua - 11-07-2006, 05:51 PM
PCIII Official C&C - by Veritas - 11-08-2006, 04:30 AM
PCIII Official C&C - by Aqua - 11-08-2006, 05:04 PM

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