07-17-2007, 02:51 AM
I'll hit you up. =)
Alright, I havent read your latest posts so I'll do the one where you were on the island fighting the mobs and destroyed the city. I really liked them they had great detail and kept me wanting to read more, like your fighting parts are phenomenal I love reading when you fight...you own. Um...I dont really see anything wrong with how you write, and I suck at giving C&C...but I tried. Just keep writing how you do. =D
Alright, I havent read your latest posts so I'll do the one where you were on the island fighting the mobs and destroyed the city. I really liked them they had great detail and kept me wanting to read more, like your fighting parts are phenomenal I love reading when you fight...you own. Um...I dont really see anything wrong with how you write, and I suck at giving C&C...but I tried. Just keep writing how you do. =D