09-24-2006, 06:46 AM
Burter: I liked it alot, even for being on the short side I thought it was good, I especially liked the first paragraph where you mentioned DA and how he was a subscriber lol.
My newest one, lemme know what you guys think, besides there being too much dialog :-\.
My Newest One
My newest one, lemme know what you guys think, besides there being too much dialog :-\.
My Newest One
![[Image: Veritas.jpg]](http://rebecca.florizone.com/sig/miscsig/Veritas.jpg)

