11-07-2006, 04:53 PM
No, we won't Jeice, unless you critique Kollifum's. You don't just get to post your roleplay. You actually have to do some work.
And "critique" doesn't mean, "Kollifum, your post is good. I like the dialogue." Critique means go as in-depth as you possibly can to let him know what he can improve on, what his strong point is, and some possibilities for future plotlines.
And "critique" doesn't mean, "Kollifum, your post is good. I like the dialogue." Critique means go as in-depth as you possibly can to let him know what he can improve on, what his strong point is, and some possibilities for future plotlines.
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