11-29-2006, 10:31 PM
Quote:Originally posted by Super BuuI remember learning that a long time ago. I always forget, though, but I try to remember every now and then, although I never revise.
Quote:Originally posted by KrillinDefinitely. When I read Bardock's "show, don't tell" rule in his roleplaying guide, I was like, "shit! That's so much better!". There's so many things you just do subconsciously which can be done better. S'why I love being at Chubbs - it's basically like having a crash course in Creative Writing.
Very, very important in poetry, but also in prose. Someone already mentioned adjectives, which carry almost as much importance in cutting. Good stuff.
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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