12-19-2006, 05:07 PM
Can somebody give me some C&C on a quest I'm doing on Arlia-sei called Eye Spy.
Here's the link.
I have yet to get any real C&C given to me. I have a vague idea of how I'm doing and some of the aspects of my writing I need to improve upon, but I'd really appreciate some input from anyone who's willing to give it. And not just, you're doing well keep it up, or your bad get better. But a indepth guide on how I am to improve and what I'm doing wrong, hopefully that isn't asking too much.
Here's the link.
I have yet to get any real C&C given to me. I have a vague idea of how I'm doing and some of the aspects of my writing I need to improve upon, but I'd really appreciate some input from anyone who's willing to give it. And not just, you're doing well keep it up, or your bad get better. But a indepth guide on how I am to improve and what I'm doing wrong, hopefully that isn't asking too much.