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Please?
#4
You are writing as thrid person here, as in you are telling his story, so just becuase you refer to him as a Saiya-jin doesn't mean he knows it. Youth, Teen, brute, grunt, any of those would work. Saiya-jin would work as well.
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Please? - by Chase - 01-20-2007, 10:14 AM
Please? - by Yamu - 01-20-2007, 04:59 PM
Please? - by Chase - 01-20-2007, 06:44 PM
Please? - by Jewtastic - 01-20-2007, 06:47 PM
Please? - by Chase - 01-20-2007, 06:51 PM
Please? - by Yamu - 01-20-2007, 07:07 PM

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