05-25-2007, 04:31 PM
The effect C4D's should have been edited to match the colour (don't see WHAT you were going for with that =/)
but yeah, the C4D effects and everything else you did do NOT mesh well together, and all of it clash and create a chaotic effect, which is an eye soare.
Moving on to the render, it should always be placed in the middle. It is the focal point of your signature, and if you place it on the side next to tons of chaotic effects, it will draw the focal away. Your text and border also needs a lot of work.
but yeah, the C4D effects and everything else you did do NOT mesh well together, and all of it clash and create a chaotic effect, which is an eye soare.
Moving on to the render, it should always be placed in the middle. It is the focal point of your signature, and if you place it on the side next to tons of chaotic effects, it will draw the focal away. Your text and border also needs a lot of work.