06-27-2007, 06:39 PM
Great intro. Your descriptions were adequate, and it was interesting enough to capture my attention. The only problem I saw was the one you pointed out -- the quality at the end began to fade as you got closer to finishing the post. It was like you were near the finishing line in a race and you started to slow down. Other than that, it was solid.
Mine: http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread....post430020
Mine: http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread....post430020

