06-28-2007, 02:54 AM
Looks like you've gotten better with depth to me. You should work on lighting an try to add some effects, that would make it hot. The scanline box looks like you attempted to put in like..a sybliminal sign, lol (which is pretty cool, if you did that on purpose). Also, the entire sig is not b/w, don't know if you noticed that or not...

