[C&C] The Pantheon: Rise of the New Gods

[Aero]

You've really grown as a writer. I can remember when you were a mere novice, but now you're getting a strong grasp on the craft. I like your style. You don't over detail or under detail, at least to me. I can see Zangya's character coming together as I read your work as her. She's evolving with you. Dark feeling? I don't really grasp tones of posts well, since all posts come off as kind of serious in a dreadful way to me. Good job though, worthy of a...


7.8/10

Get the character down more and whatnot and it will increase. Skill at writing will come naturally as your write more and more. Master her.


My post:
http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread....post430550


I'd like c&c and a rating (1-10/10) Thanks.