06-28-2007, 06:12 AM
Gokua:
i thought the opening paragraph was great. your details grabbed me right at the start. And your entrance into the battle, with the quick ki beams was pretty nice. Overall i thought it was a good post,
6.5/10
http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread....post430570
i thought the opening paragraph was great. your details grabbed me right at the start. And your entrance into the battle, with the quick ki beams was pretty nice. Overall i thought it was a good post,
6.5/10
http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread....post430570

