10-09-2007, 04:12 PM
Didn't you like ... leave angrily? Or was that just a joke now? >_>
Anyway, that was pretty amazing. Your writing style itself was pristine, and I noticed no errors, so all that's left to comment on is the story itself. I'm just wondering whether it's part of a larger piece or standalone. Standalone, it's perfectly done, and there's plenty of closure, so that's what I'm guessing. If it's a larger piece, then I'd have to see more. =P
Honestly I can't think up anything to critique it on. I hate love stories, but I sincerely enjoyed that.
Anyway, that was pretty amazing. Your writing style itself was pristine, and I noticed no errors, so all that's left to comment on is the story itself. I'm just wondering whether it's part of a larger piece or standalone. Standalone, it's perfectly done, and there's plenty of closure, so that's what I'm guessing. If it's a larger piece, then I'd have to see more. =P
Honestly I can't think up anything to critique it on. I hate love stories, but I sincerely enjoyed that.
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