Burter Advice

[Burter]

Whether your deserve it or not, people will not want to see you win twice in a row

[Whompt]

If I come back as Blue, and I want to, I'll be roleplaying the same as before. Though I plan to have a bit more character development and a lot more.... uh, good writing. How thinks you, Burt?

[Toshiro]

Originally posted by Gohan
me

[Warako]

Me as CJ, you can tell me that I'll be the first person eliminated but I'll still join and bite some knee caps.

[Burter]

@Bujin:

Haven't read anything from you that I recall, so I'm gonna have to request you throw some pre-show roleplays up and then ask again.

@Gohan:

I think you'll be out early again. If you write a lot, it might keep you in but I don't think your writing compares to some of the people in the game right now.

Not to say you don't have potential, because you certainly do. But you're gonna have an uphill battle for sure

@Cell Jr:

Not sure, need to see pre-show stuff

[Grandpa Gohan]

MePlz.

D:

[Warako]

Originally posted by Burter
@Cell Jr:

Not sure, need to see pre-show stuff

Poo'y, thought you'd remember my DA:C stuff though there was a lot of RP's to keep up to date with.

[Nori]

>_>. <_<.

Me please.

[Paragus]

I would like to know mine please.

[Olibu]

me next! =O

[Aero]

Great Burts, based on what you've read (And you've read my DA:C writings), how far do you think I can make it in this saga?

[Burter]

Cut off here

[Whompt]

You forgot me... v.v

[Burter]

This is now advice only, not predictions

[Olibu]

Do we need to call dibs again? If so, me =O

[Burter]

Nah, closed till I get around to doing those up there

[Burter]

@Blue:

Same advice as Celipa. Stand out more or you're just another name to me, and I won't care. That was your problem last year; I just had no interest for your character.

@Grandpa Gohan:

I honestly think you have a serious shot to win the entire thing. I love your character, and you have a creative way to make me just keep wanting to find out more about him.

Your downfall is going to be being outshined by possible allies. You don't want to stick with anybody that you yourself can't beat in a fight

@Akane:

Same advice/downfall as Gramps. Your writing needs no critism.

@Paragus:

A lot of people need to either go solo or stick with someone they can beat. You're different. I think you would benefit from a partner that you can interact with through the game, or at least until they die. I think you should find an opposite for Paragus and use that relationship as a writing strategy

@Olibu:

You have a way of giving me a fantastic character, without actually being a steller writer. I'm sure your writing has only gotten better since last year.

The main thing is to step up the writing and try to keep both eyes open in terms of strategy. Everyone is gonna play this game, so don't be naive.

@Gokua:

Sorry, I'm gonna need to see some pre show stuff

[Android 17]

I'd like some advice, please.

Thank you.

[Nori]

I..Love you Burter. =O

[Violet]

Me? Please? I'll give you punch and pie!