Official Round 2 Brackets/Info/Discussion

[Alexander Trafford]

The peice you wrote freaked me out, which is odd because i usually write fucked up peices for IC here.

[CoolSpice]

I figured it would have that effect on some people. I had a few idea's, but this one stood out for me because i've never written about an extremely disturbed person. So I figured that I would try it out.

Wow, that was great Rad.

[Jonathan Meer]

Sorry Bardock and Reb, but there's just no way I can continue to compete. Today is a good example of what my last week or so has been: I woke up at 8:30 AM, took a shower, went to work for eight hours, did errands and various things for college until right now, when it's 10:00 PM. I just haven't had the time to even roleplay in the last week at all, on any site.

So, again, really sorry, but I just don't think I can continue. If I had known my week would be this hectic beforehand, Reb, I wouldn't have bothered. =/

[Burter Jr]

All results tommorrow.

[Kaden]

Originally posted by Spice
Wow, that was great Rad.

Thanks.

I gotta say, disturbing or not, you took the task a route I never would have thought of.

[Ashe]

Home from work and writing my thing now, if its not too late.

[Hellfighter 17]

I think Spice had a nice idea, but he didn't execute it too well and he took a few things too far.

Rad's didn't seme the most original, but that's probably because because he felt more comfortable with his, and it shows. Very nicely done. The use of ellipses was perfect. A lot of people would have overdosed on them in that situation, but you used them just right, especially considering most people I know don't use 'em too much in writing with a pencil or pen (and don't say yer guy used a marker).

[Rem-13]

I would liek to make some excuse like 'I didn't have the time' or 'My MSword broke' or something but to be honest, I had this thing halfway written before I realized it was shit. After that I couldn't motiviate myself to start over or continue. I really am sorry.

[Kazuya]

Quite personally, I liked Spice's submission more than Rad's, I think because Spice wasn't remorseful, but even the day before his guy's death, he was still a freakin psycho. No Regrets.

Rads, his was just, too slow paced for me, so I didn't really get into it as much as I did Spice's.

Awesome job, though, boys.

[Ashe]

Originally posted by Violet
Quite personally, I liked Spice's submission more than Rad's, I think because Spice wasn't remorseful, but even the day before his guy's death, he was still a freakin psycho. No Regrets.

Rads, his was just, too slow paced for me, so I didn't really get into it as much as I did Spice's.

Awesome job, though, boys.

Fully agreed.

[Burter Jr]

Spice didn't have a lot of personality for me, know what I mean? Like, the tone was just kind of plain. Rad's had a very genuine tone.

A good attitude for Spice's would have been something like rebellious. "Yea, I fucking did it, and I'm happy I did. Go ahead and kill me."

[Ashe]

I think the tone of his personality was a lot of what it was about. His character was going into the stuff shamelessly and explaining how they felt and had a slightly aloof attitude, like they were completely just above it all and were so distant from the traumatic life that they had no emotions at all, only desires.