Rate the person above you

[Jonathan Meer]

Five.

You've got good expression, but your character feels cheap. You tell us what he's feeling, rather than showing it. The reader doesn't really get any connection to what you're writing, since there's nothing concrete to really get an idea of. You've got little mannerisms down for your character, but it just feels like the small details are nailed upon while the larger ones remain totally uncertain. I dunno, I haven't read much of your stuff at all, so I probably can't comment too much on that, but yeah.

By the way, don't fret about the low score. I'm going off the actual 1-10 scale here, while everyone else seems to think the scale is 6-10.

[Raspberry]

8.1 =P

Yeah, nothing to say...

[Aero]

9.1


I had the pleasure of facing you in KoA (And we'll probably face again in the final round) and I was totally outmatched by your skill. You're a good roleplayer that seems to interject emotion, which keeps me interested.

[Shun]

8

I really like your writing, I can actually see whats going on..well..I think I see it

[Jesper]

7.5

Pretty good. <.< I have a headache, so I'll stop there.

[Aiden]

EDIT: For Yamcha
6.3

Your writing has improved since the last time i've rped with you, but you still need improvement. When we meet up back on earth in a few days, we'll work on it.


EDIT: For Buijin

6.7

Good stuff, but i haven't read enough

[Piper Juunanagou]

6.

From what I read in PC3, you're well on your way to better things. Keep up the good work.

[Ruhiel]

9.0

When you want to write, you write damn good. Your writing during FoF2 was probably a 9.5, in my opinion. All actions that occur in your roleplays flow together, especially your roleplays you did as 17 in Hell, going after that Bio-Android, whose name is slipping my mind. >.>
There is of course always room for improvement, but I'm not sure how much better you can get. O.o

[Jesper]

9.0

I know I do this too much, but I couldn't let this one pass. <.< I've known you the longest out of everyone here, and your writing has always amazed me. When I was first starting out, I tried to emulate your style of writing. And although it has morphed into a more personal style, I have you to thank for a lot of my progress as a writer.

[John Doe]

6.5

I only read your latest RP, so I couldn't get into it much.

[Aqua]

Ah, Koola.

7.2

Strongly above average but nothing that makes me anxious to read all your stuff.

[Aero]

Originally posted by Aqua
Ah, Koola.

7.2

Strongly above average but nothing that makes me anxious to read all your stuff.

8.5


I find your work sexy, no joke. I read your stuff almost as much as I read Recoome's (which I read about so many times a day, lol). But yeah, I love your work and enjoy reading it.

[Sullivan]

You know what I think of your writing. You're pretty much my equal, and I consider myself pretty above average. If you write something, I can read it with no problem. It flows, it rocks, it rolls.

9.0.

[John Doe]

7.5

I've read only small amounts of your writing, and they we're good. I'd post higher, but I don't know the flow of your writing that good, and I'd have to read like 30 RP's in that thread, lol(lazyness ftw!).

[Saz]

6/10 I haven't read loads of your writing, from what I've read you seem to be good enough, occasionally though there are afew spelling errors.

[Aero]

@ Goku Jr.
You get a sexy 5. Why? Well, you're average. Also, you would have gotten a 5.5, but your posts are so incredibly short.

@ Sazuaa

6.5

You're getting better with every RP. Keep it up.

[Super Buu]

6.5 (bear in mind I'm probably more critical than most)

You're getting it pretty much downpat, but you've got a lot of potential yet to unearth. I can see some discrepancies in your writing, but it's definitely above average. Read lots and keep writing, and you'll be well on your way to awesometude.

[Zarbon]

8.5

Sometimes, your posts can be near masterful. Sometimes not so much. You're a fantastic roleplayer though, and manage to put a lot of emotion into your characters.

[Super Buu]

Zarbon: 8

You masterfully convey humour and irony in the narration of your posts. And you know I love quirky narration (s'why I'm such a Kibbles fan). My only criticism is that is can sometimes get samey after a while, and your characters can be somewhat two-dimensional (XD pun NOT intended, but noted). Regardless, you're still a skilled writer.

Recoome: 8.5

I haven't followed your stuff as much as I really should, and I need to read more. Quirky narration, a certain running sense of humour contribute to your success. You're underappreciated right now, but I think if you were more active you'd definitely start to get recognised for your mad skillz.

[Ruhiel]

7.5/9.5

Exactly what Zarbon said. You flip-flop in your writing. Sometimes you'll write something that I'm kind of like "eh, it was decent, but nothing too amazing," to something absolutely ridiculous where I'm left thinking "why the fuck did you stop? Keep going! I want to know more!!!11!!"

Yeah, but, if you round together your amazing writing (which you pull off pretty frequently O.o), I'd say I'd give you an average 8.75. You're hard to put an exact number on. I guess it kind of depends on your mood that day, because it's evident in your writing.

EDIT: BLAST!

SB:

Where have you gone? I'm not sure I've read your work since DA 2006. That's my fault of course. >.>

Regardless, based on what I DO know of your writing, I'd give you a 9.1. You're damn good at writing when you want to. It's easy to tell what posts you make are forced and which is your real writing, simply because you go from "uh... yeah... didn't follow that one..." to "Damn. I wish I could write like that." However, you're pretty consistent on the "real" writing, so I rarely notice writing from you that appears forced. But still, even your forced writing is above average. >.>
You need to teach me how to pick adjectives like you do. I find myself reusing some too many times.