Rate the person above you

[Aqua]

8.0 simply because your avatar is amazing. But seriously, your writing is very quality.

[Kazuya]

8. Holy shit. Btw, I made that avi. <,< I am surprised he's still using it. XD

[Jonathan Meer]

7.5

You're good, no doubt, but your style is not rounded out yet. One of your biggest virtues is that you can post good-quality posts pretty damn often. Your biggest fault is making your dialogue sound natural. While you've improved on this a lot since you first arrived on Chubbs (amongst other things), you still have a little ways to go.

[Veritas]

Deffinently would have to say from 8.5-9...I havnt read much of your stuff but the stuff I did read I liked alot . One thing about your writing is that it gets your attention from the start.

[Jesper]

6.5

You're a work in progress, and you're certainly progressing. Keep it up, and you'll go far.

[OldNoriAccount]

Recoome: 8


I enjoy your writing, but something is missing. In all honesty I don't know what it is, just that it sin't there. But I really like reading your posts, so keep them coming. ^_~

[Jesper]

7.0

Sure glad to see a new face that is passionately active. (Weird phrasing, I know. <.<) Your writing is good, but as you said to Recoome, I cannot put my finger on what could possibly be missing. All I know is that you're good with the potential to be awesome.

[Super Buu]

Akane: 7

You have an incredible knack for description, and a very varied choice of words. One thing that sticks out, however, is the segregation between text and dialogue. A skilled writer should be able to weave the two together, as in the following example:

Originally posted by Bra
?First, I?ve got something to ask you,? Bra informed, her countenance becoming one of foreboding skepticism. ?It?s why I saved your ass back there.? she placed a hand on her hip, her expression growing more hostile as she let the last words out.

?What?s that?? the rubbery pink creature queried, somewhat interested to hear the child?s reasons for having spared him a most uncomfortable situation.

Instead of having dialogue complete separate from action, you can put 'em both together, and it tends to flow better IMO. Also I don't like the bolding of text that a lot of people do, but that's more a stylistic thing as opposed to the writing itself. XD

You've got some amazing potential. Keep it up, and I have a feeling before long you'll have a fan-following.

Bujin: 8.8

I nearly gave you a nine. The only reason I'm not is because you have some inconsistencies. Like you said to me on AIM, your stuff on Chubbs isn't as awesome as your Zidane stuff. At the top of your game, you're one of the best writers on the site, hands down. You can tell when you're not trying as much, because there's the occasional minute graphical error (comma being a full stop at the end of a line of dialogue which runs into another sentence) and the beautiful description isn't as underlined.

That said, even at the bottom of your game you're still a hugely talented writer.

[Medraut]

Ack type up a post only to have someone beat me in heh.


Kolli: 8, PC was good read ^.^

[OldNoriAccount]

O.o. Wow. Um, guess people really wanted to post or something.

Super Buu: 9

Your are definetly in my opinion one of the better writers on the site, perhaps flowing with the fact you have a character you can majorly diversify with. However a character is nothing without the writer, and you do more then fit the part. I love searching for your writing when I am board, and absorbing the reading.

Bujin: 8

I really haven't read anything with you in it, save a couple of posts. But I like what I read.

Kollifum: 8.5.

I like your writing, especially your Spar with Jeice at the moment. More so because in all honesty, I have never heard of your character. I like people who turn characters who are insignifigant into something great. Keep writing, boi.

Cell Jr: 7.5

I like the quest you are doing at the moment, and I read it whenever it is updated. And for your information, I hate english class. ^_~



I felt inclined to post several times for all of you, because I got so many. ^_~

[Aero]

8

Your work is pleasant and very enjoyable. There is room for improvement, though.

[Jesper]

8.6

You're obviously good enough to usurp the Vegeta throne, and now that you have, you can only go up.

EDIT: My bad, Aqua. <.<

[Aqua]

Originally posted by Vegeta
You've got some good stuff, but really all I can suggest is put some more body to your posts. They're good in large amounts, but alone they're pretty gutless.

6 for not putting a number for bun, and I'm not a fan of the transfering some aspects of previous owners storyline stuff to a new owner and then you have creative rights, but then your limited because of who your character is... blah blah blah. Nothing personal at all, i just have a bad taste in my mouth in regards to the character transfer thing. But an 8 on your RPing

edit: i've already rated you Bujin ^_^

[Alura]

Bujin: 7-8

Quality stuff. Judging from your sign-up post, gotten even better since I last had you in a saga

Aqua: 9

One of the rumored legendary golden newbies.

[Super Buu]

Vegeta: 7.5

You use some amazing descriptions, and you can really paint the world around you. I particularly liked one metaphor you used, that the tingling sensation of teleporting was like a relentless pine branch scratching across your body. Sometimes, though, it can get a bit heavy and confusing. With your Vegeta-competition SSJ RP, I wasn't sure what was going on a lot of the time. Some of the action seemed a little rushed, with the focus going into description. That said, I look forward to reading your stuff as Vegeta.

[Jonathan Meer]

9.5, which is pretty much the highest score I'd feel comfortable ever giving out.

I read your Eye of the Tiger. Incredible stuff. Not a single fault I have to criticize. Your stuff has actual depth to it. Like, some of Chubbs' great roleplaying feels like beef jerky. It tastes good and stuff, but it isn't filling. Your roleplaying is like a three-foot bratwurst.

[Ruhiel]

9.75

You have humor in a deathgrip, and you have made it your bitch. That would sum up your ability to write comical posts, they're absolutely masterful. There has only been one occasion where I have literally laughed aloud from reading a post when it wasn't yours.
On a more serious note, your serious writing. It's also very, very good. When you compare it to your mastery of humor, it's hard to compare it, but even when you're not writing something like your post with Krillin and Twenty heading towards the Pendulum Room, and you made this elaborate story of side characters no one would have known about, their lives, their mistakes, and all the ways Krilin affected them without even realizing it. Hilarious, and also literary genius. The number of steps ahead you had to think to write all that together and make it cohesive is astounding, I couldn't ever do it if I tried. You've been the writer I've always written alongside, and we sort of progressed together, forming our own styles. Your writing is absolutely amazing, and, except for the rare time that Reijin goes all out, or Rad gives it his all, you are, in my opinion, the best writer on the site. I can't give you a ten, because, no one's perfect. But, to me, you've gotten very close to what I consider astounding writing. I have a feeling that when our fight kicks into full gear, I won't be able to keep up. =D

[Alura]

Don't post if you arn't rating above you, Vegeta. I got skipped.

20:

7-8. Not perfect, but definetly huge potential. Probably one of the most creative minds on the site, and dedicated in terms of storyline

[OldNoriAccount]

Recoome: 8

(Don't think I have rated you)

Your pretty good, and I check out your posts when I have nothing better to do. On top of that, you owe me a Spar, boi.

And I love you. 8o

Not really <_<. But I still like your writing.

[Aero]

Ben, you're an interesting one. Some of your pieces are fantastic, others only slightly above average.

You're:


8.5 - 9.5


Sometimes you show glimpses of near 10s, but other times I feel as if I could have done a better job.