Rate the person above you

[Jonathan Meer]

5.0

Mediocre at best. I dunno. Maybe I just haven't been reading your good ones, but what I've seen of you, you don't score much more than average.

[Aero]

Krillin: 8.5


You're a good writer that does a very good job creating a vignette. I just wished you'd RP more.

[Alexander Trafford]

Recoome was skipped!

Recoome- 7, its good and only getting better, so keep it up and you'll be one of the best, i think.

Bun- 6.75-7.5, your stuff wavers. sometimes i'll try to read it and vomit in my mouth a little, then others time i read it and have to change my shorts.

[Vejita I]

Originally posted by Minoshia
Recoome was skipped!

Recoome- 7, its good and only getting better, so keep it up and you'll be one of the best, i think.

Bun- 6.75-7.5, your stuff wavers. sometimes i'll try to read it and vomit in my mouth a little, then others time i read it and have to change my shorts.

7 - 7.5

I've seen a shit load of amazing writers in my day so to hit high on my mark is pretty difficult. But I'll say this - I absolutely love the idea of a full-blown evil person in this RPG. I was the same way in DBZA as Retane as you seem to portray Mino on here. I think you try your hardest to show you're the most evil character in this RPG and love the idea of that. You don't stay within the boundaries of DBZ, you truly try and make Mino a bad-ass. I hope in the near future to give you competition on being the most "evil character", but yeah, I'm enjoying it.

Oh - and I figured I'd bring this back since DA:C is starting up. =O

[Grandpa Gohan]

Rawr.

KV: 8 - 8.5

Not that its 'hard' to get up there on my scale, but more so not many people can inspire me to write as you have. Your experiance with KV shows through your writing as if you were him, or visa-versa. I hope to one day be able to write like you, as of now I think my writing lacks a certain.. 'voice' which yours carries loud and clear.

[Aero]

6.5 - 7


You have some bright spots in your writing, but as you just mentioned, you kid of lack "it". I don't know what it is, but you're lacking it.

[King Cold444]

6-6.5

You tend to bounce from time-to-time, from "not really the best" to "okay, something a bit more in depth". It could be the delivery, since you write a majority of short posts. I'm sorry that I really can't tell you what it is, but it's either the delivery or you should try spreading your ideas throughout a longer post. Otherwise, not the worst.

[Kaden]

7.5

Good stuff, no doubt about it. You seem to have a decent handle on your own style of writing.

[King Cold444]

8-8.5

Xtreme? Mebe. I like what you do with your roleplays and how you've developed Rad over the years. I also like your style, a bit narrative, but enough elements to give it a nudge in its own direction. *nods in approval* *points to first word*

[Old Janemba]

"With an unresounding bound the changeling was cast back out into the unforgiving cascade of droplets."

Hmm.. This sentence is great minus that resounding bound bit. I guess its all the ing words in one sentence.

"definitely some light in this place,"

Does there definitely have to be some light in the place or is there just light there?
"until it eventually touched"
"Upon a throne of, seemingly, human skulls"
Someone "yawned loudly"
Something Cold saw was "unnaturally distorted"

See the trend? In some cases the ly words fit, and in others they just slow the piece down. Good writing, ly words not so good for building tension. If you need to describe an action even more then use stronger verbs.

I read that once. I use ly words all the time. . and that's why I know it's true. It does slow it down if you look at it and then edit the words out. Otherwise you paint nice pictures with a very diverse vocabulary and the last line was really cool. . Maybe it just appeals to me because I'm a fan of that whole comic book hero bag. No spelling errors. That's always pimp.

9/10

Someone cut into this one. I want every mistake shredded. ;-) The quest to get fucked up: -- working title

[Aero]

8.0 - 8.7


I had the pleasure to RP beside you during my SPK training, and I must say, you're a solid writer. You are good in every field, and though you're not the faster of any field, you don't seem to be obviously weak in any field. I hope I'll have the pleasure to write alongside you sometime in the future as well.

[Sammah]

8.0

I like your hair.

[Aero]

Is that the only reason? =o

[Sammah]

Originally posted by Gokua
Is that the only reason? =o

Nah, its also cus your clothes inspire me.

o.O

[Grandpa Gohan]

Having the pleasure to read some of Sammah's work, I must say, its definantly sexy. :o

8.5

Sam: XTREME.

[King Cold444]

Recoome gets the 7.5-8.0

Your writing just has a way of capturing me, especially the fight with you and Cel. Your style is your style and I hope to see more from you.

[Vejita I]

Originally posted by King Cold
Recoome gets the 7.5-8.0

Your writing just has a way of capturing me, especially the fight with you and Cel. Your style is your style and I hope to see more from you.

9. Good stuff, no doubt.

[Downy Peach]

9 - Interesting character, I'll be reading from you in DA:C.

[OldNoriAccount]

Tapion ish a 9.

I love your character, seriously. The whole drunk swordman thing rocks my pants off.

~_~

[Aero]

Originally posted by Tapion
9 - Interesting character, I'll be reading from you in DA:C.

8.7


I think that you're a good RPer, but there's room for improvement. You are doing good with Tap though.

I can't wait until we fight! =D Two drunk swordsmen having a sword fight; it's gonna pwn!