Storyline Discussion

[Hellfighter 17]

*claps*

Nicely put together, worth the wait.

[Zarbon]

Originally posted by Furiza
x30 Power-Ups: A very powerful strength boost, very rare and difficult to attain, these powers-ups are awarded in very exceptional circumstances.

Requirements:

250 Determination
2,000,000 Skill/Magic
x10 Power-up
x20 Power-up

Note: Having these requirements does not automatically earn you the power-up, it merely qualifies you for them. They are earned primarily during staff-run storylines or in very exceptional circumstances for outstanding role-playing.

x40 Power-ups: The ultimate boost in power available. Extremely rare and near impossible to obtain. These are awarded only to the most elite and dedicated.

Requirements:

400 Determination
3,000,000 Skill/Magic
x10 Power-Up
x20 Power-Up
x30 Power-Up
Extreme Emotional Trigger

Note: Having these requirements does not automatically earn you the power-up, it merely qualifies you for them. They are earned primarily during staff-run storylines or in very exceptional circumstances for outstanding role-playing.

Thanks, adding now.

[Hellfighter 17]

You should have Slug's part in the same fashion, so it doesn't look half assed. The two put together that is, not necassarily Slug's, that is.

[Ruhiel]

*golf clap*

Great job, Furiza. This is all really comin' together.

[Zarbon]

That works, the steroids and powers can be earned during sagas too.

LOVE TO FURIZA!

*Hugs*

[Hellfighter 17]

Yea, I decided to make my 'Shield of Dreams' NPC early and I will make another transformation for each race once again, hopefully.

[Zarbon]

This is perfect! We just need 17's NPC and were done, good job team .

I never doubt Furiza again.

[Zarbon]

Originally posted by Furiza
Yay. I get teh love. Now, someone mentioned steroids?
*steals*
Aha! Page nine belongs to meee!

Its for humans.

If they have proven themselves in battle, the Commander of the humans shall give them authorization for a Steroid powerup from a recently found chemical.

Elementions get Magic powerups from there sages for the same reasons.

It was the only way to get the humans a powerup.

[Hellfighter 17]

This is the best name for any NPC.


Yadneerg: A Elemental of the Electric side. He had experienced many wounds in battle iwth the lowly humans due to inefficient shields. He would then have to heal before he could engage in battle once again. One day, in battle with the alien race, Yadneerg was about to be hit by a shot from a Laser Gun. He had already suffered a extremeity of pain to his body earlier and was not sur eif he could sustain such a impact. He put his armsin front of him in a last desperation, but they would not do anything. He closed his eyes and his mind was a blur. Then, seconds had passed and he was not dead. He looked ahead of him to see that there was some sort of shield blocking his view.

After a few more seconds he began to become exhausted and the shield disappeared. Another soldier then extinguished the human, but he was amazed at hwat he had just done. After a few months of training he had perfected it and began teaching his men how to perform the move. He will most likely teach any Elemental that comes his way, but his trainingmethods are harsh, he will liereally put you in mortal danger, eventually, for you to be able to learn this move. He might even teach you how to form a image of any kind onto it.


Okay now, Zarbon. You should make bolds and underlines for any necassary things. I can do that if you wnat me to, I am in the mood. But don't post it when you are done, just prepare it. I will attempt to make two more power-ups and NPCs for them, but if I don't hav ethem up by 8:30, then post it. So I have about a little over a hour. So, let's blast off again!

What about Slug's power-up for humans?

[Zarbon]

Don't bother, its fine.

I'm making a final post with underlines and stuff, in a minute or so.

[Hellfighter 17]

Remeber to underline or do something to the NPCs names. Any title sorta thing should have something done to it. Also do a spell/grammar check. Also post it here first so we can look at it and give suggestions. Don't want to tell you what to do, but I want us to win, badly =\

[Krillin]

I agree HF17. We can't afford to lose this one. The last thing we need is to gain momentum in the wrong direction.

[Zarbon]

I itaticed most names, did a long spell check, underlined and bolded, and sized.

There we go.

[Hellfighter 17]

It looks pretty good, but could you bold the names along with italicize? It was hard to find where one ended and began.

[Ruhiel]

Hehehe... I still noticed this. In the storyline at the end, you've got: "and the humans ever even knew what it was for."

Got ya again .

[Zarbon]

All corrected.

My bleeding is halting.

Steak and Beer for all!

[Zarbon]

I'm nervous...

[Hellfighter 17]

Just for staff reference and for all of you guys, I will be gone within 2 hours most lilkely and will not be back until either late tomorrow to Sunday. So if we get pulled to the boardroom, I won't be able to comment.

[Zarbon]

Ok, but your our greatest asset!

[Hellfighter 17]

Then if we go there say that and don't bring me into the final boardroom, unless you feel you need to, I wouldn't want to be kept on because I wasn't here at the time to argue my defense. So, do what you think is best for the team. That is if we go to the boardroom.

May the force be in our pants.