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8/10
Ya, it was kinda rushed. Are you the Jeice with the girlfriend who can draw? And I've read a few of your posts, I'd say they are very well thought out.
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Quote:Originally posted by DWood35
Are you the Jeice with the girlfriend who can draw?
Uhm...I dont think so lol.
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Opps, my fault man. But ya...*no more spam*
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Jeice = 7/10. You're doing a decent job last time I had the time to randomly read some roleplays posted around the boards.
DWood35 = 6.5/10? I haven't read your stuff in a long time, but I'm going to give you an average score since I don't recall it being either really crappy or really awesome. On an unrelated note: Are you going to be returning come Turnover?
Quote:Vad's Whimsical Whimsicalisms: Men. Good stuff there.
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10/10
All I got to say is I love your writing some of my favorites are in your lastest rp thread they are just magnificant(sp?). And yes I'am returning when the Turnover happens.
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Had to read your "latest roleplay" in order to tell (like people will have to do with me, which sucks because my last roleplay sucked horribly), but...
7.0/10 - You had some good points in that one roleplay, but you blatantly rushed that ending. xD I understand that you might have since it was your last roleplay before going OOC, hence my giving you a seven instead of a six.
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As Bujin, I'd say you were around a 7/10 or 7.5/10. Overall, I'd weigh you as an 8/10. You're a talented writer whenever you can really focus on your goals and aspirations without having your attention fragmented by some outside source.
Quote:Vad's Whimsical Whimsicalisms: Men. Good stuff there.
![[Image: Viper-Mini-Sig-Piper.png]](http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b318/ThundercatsHO/Viper-Mini-Sig-Piper.png)
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8.4/10 for 17
You're able to string together content and quality in an interesting way. My only criticism would be that you don't make me love or hate your character.
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I have only read you challenge with Max, but I like what I saw, I'll be keeping my eye out for you.
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7.5/10 - You've always been someone whose writing I like to read over whenever I find some free time. Of course, this applies more so to other websites, since I'm not that acquainted with your work here as Olibu. Despite that, I reckon it isn't a major drop from your other work. That said...*makes a personal note to read more of you Olibu stuff <_<*
Quote:Vad's Whimsical Whimsicalisms: Men. Good stuff there.
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8 outta 10
I just think you're a good writer. Flow, word choice, development, creativity, style... I think you've got all of that down pretty well. Getting better is just a matter of tweaking your process to figure out what does and doesn't work best for you.
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8/10
I didn't like the first post of yours that I read, but luckily I read more. You have what you want your character to be down pat, which is always great to see.
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Out of curiosity, what was the first post of mine that you read?
(whoever posts next, please rate Bujin, not me)
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I think it was in PC3. *shrugs* I honestly don't recall the specifics. I like your stuff now, so don't worry too much about it. xD
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Generally interesting stuff.
7.5/10
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8/10 Easily. Probably higher, but I haven't read enough of your work to rate you higher. All I've read was your DA:C work. =P
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7, from the little I've read
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7/10
You're perticularly good with saga storlines, also very creative.
Does honesty earn respect or inspire revenge? Is it smarter to attack the strong or annihilate the weak?
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Quote:Originally posted by DWood35
8/10
If your the coola I think you are, then ya I think you write pretty good. Also your a pretty cool guy.
I don't think I am. I'm not the Coola who participated in DA:C. I'm the Coola who joined as Majin Buu then switched.
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7/10
I've only read a few of your roleplays, and it didn't seem like you tried a lot. They were still good pieces of writing, though.
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