[C&C] As I Watch the World Go Up In Flames

[Juno]

http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread....post469931

Post #1 is up. I'd like some hardcore C&C please, and I'd just like to warn you that I'm really bad about giving return criticism, but if you want some, just ask, and I'll try to get to it eventually. I just really forget about it all the time. Oh, and by 'hardcore' C&C, I mean I want you to be very constructive. Not 'OMG lawls you suck' hardcore.

[Juno]

http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread....post470065

Post #2 is up. Was going to reveal more in this post, but decided to cut back to keep the suspense rolling. Nevertheless, I think it was exciting, and I hope everyone else agrees, as well.