Personal Saga

[Ander]

The green sky no longer shone bright as it did during the day, Namek at night was much different from Namek during the day. The full moon shone bright in the sky like a nocturnal light in the sky.

Just to be the cloud that hates on the sunshine...

Namek has three suns, and as one sets another rises, so it can never be nighttime. Why do you think they're green? Actually, too much vitamin D turns your skin orange...but oh well...

I'll give you some actual criticism in a minute.


(...before anyone jumps on me about freedom and creativity and it doesn't have to follow the series, I KNOW.)

[Ander]

Originally posted by King Cold
Cell i just have to say that you are an awesome rper. ok bardock i actually didn't know that namek had 3 suns or i would have included that factor in the rp. and cell i was just wondering if you had read my join post or just knew that info from my freedom post

I was more just messing around than being critical. Check your PMs in a couple.

[Ander]

Recoome gives good advice. You should take notes. I sent you a PM on the basics of RPing.