10-12-2004, 01:57 AM
Quote:Originally posted by Bardock (member)
You RP is too short you should make it bigger and impress the Admins.
Just a tip.
Dont post on the join forums, Bardock.
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Toma, all the information is good, but you do need to try and expand the rp. Also, use proper punctuation. Try looking around the this board to see some correct rps.
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