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#61
I would just like to say, 20, that they are not really insults. They are just criticism which I'm sure Furiza could have made constructive if given the opportunity. If I become TA, I would like constructive criticism to help me do good on the task. I, too, will follow 'til the ned, though.

So I have to make a NPC, or a whole army of them? And I make them for all techs, or the ones I created?
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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#62
Quote:Originally posted by Hell Fighter 17
I would just like to say, 20, that they are not really insults. They are just criticism which I'm sure Furiza could have made constructive if given the opportunity. If I become TA, I would like constructive criticism to help me do good on the task. I, too, will follow 'til the ned, though.

I don't mind it either.

Furiza's idea is great, but I think it would do more harm then good...
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#63
Oh and 17, watch, I changed your job.
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#64
You sure there isn't anything else I can do? I mean heck, the stats were cake. Nothing much to them.
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#65
I didnt get anything =(
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#66
Quote:Originally posted by Hell Fighter 17
So I have to make a NPC, or a whole army of them? And I make them for all techs, or the ones I created?
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#67
Quote:Originally posted by Hell Fighter 17
Quote:Originally posted by Hell Fighter 17
So I have to make a NPC, or a whole army of them? And I make them for all techs, or the ones I created?

Missed that, i'm a moron.

Just yours, I got the others handled, and remember to include where he is from, if you have a problem with names, tell me.

I'm doing Races right now.
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#68
So I just make one uber powerful elemental. I can choose anyone to, eh, nice. I will also make a power-up that will be special for him, if that is okay.
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#69
Quote:Originally posted by Hell Fighter 17
So I just make one uber powerful elemental. I can choose anyone to, eh, nice. I will also make a power-up that will be special for him, if that is okay.

A power-up for the NPC? Sure, not too strong now.
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#70
This is it so far...

The Stars of Time

Storyline: It all starts on Earth around 2400, when the world is in trouble do to pollution, global warning, and other problems.

Using the theories of other life used in the past, the United Nations sent out various ships to find other life, and see if they can help us in anyway.

After searching for about 9 years, in early 2409, the crews discovered a solar system (Called Elementia) with various remains of structures, technologies, and life. They quickly set up research centers on the planets, and found various things to help them, but it wasn?t enough, they needed more, for crime was increasing.

Over the next few years, they discovered various things, until one day a scientist, Adam Robertson, discovered one, and that one was in a lab accident, in which creatures were released.

That tablet was involved in a spell for restarting time, and the aliens, or Elementions they called themselves, went to war, when this was threatened, even though the humans ever knew what it was for.

Starting stats/money: Elementions get ?Magic? and ?Coins? while Humans get ?Skill? and ?Money?.

MAX SKILL/MAGIC: 805,000
Skill/Magic: 805,000

PHYSICAL
-Strength: 100
-Defense: 100
-Speed: 100
-Stamina: 100
-Recovery: 100
-Attack Power: 100
MENTAL
-Intelligence: 100
-Luck: 100
-Determination: 100

Coins/Money: 500
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Skill/Magic = 575[3(str. + def.)+2(Speed + Stamina + Recovery + Attackpower)]

Non-Player Characters:

Commander James Laflare: The leader of the Human military out in Elementia, he clears all injections of a new steroid on various levels, he is located on The Laflare Starport. (Humans Only)

Sage Oalama, Reala, Grana, and Luama: He can enhance your magical abilites by increasing your strength and size. (Elementions Only, Oalama is on Oceania, Reala is on Flanaria, Grana is on Griana, Luama on Lumioua.)

Ranger R.R Johnson (Richard for short): An expert sniper, is able to teach Ranger Time to Humans, he is located in the research center of Griana, as a guard.

Races:

Humans: A common race, you know them well.

Elementions: An alien race, known as the ?Keepers of Time? to the universe, except for humans though, there are four species, one for each planet.

Elemention Species:

Fire Elemention: These creatures take home to Flarania, they are mini-men, covered in hot flames, and have steaming claws to attack with.

Water Elemention: A fish-like creature, but has hands and legs, able to change from lungs to gulls, and uses acid and his claws to attack people.

Earth Elemention: A creature made of mud, and is leaf covered, the creature has hard fists to smash opponents.

Lightning Elemention: A lizard-man with very quick feet, his attacks aren?t strong, only punches, but his speed is unbelievable.

Location Names:

Planets:

Flanaria: A fire planet, covered with volcanos and flame, this is the planet that they had to scan, for the atmosphere was too hot to pass through, they scanned and found various structures which had various things within to them was very interesting, too bad they couldn't see it or check it for better life.

Oceania: A water covered planet without a bit of land to be seen, it has new types of sea animals and more, and it has various artifacts which clean water and the air, and various new weapons too.

Griana: A jungle planet, strange wildlife life here among small lakes and tall trees, and a chem was found to stop or slow growth, even in humans!

Lumioua: A planet charged with electricity and its charges causes various earthquakes! The rocks on this planet even attract electricity, and that means Earth found a new source of power.

Human Research Centers/Starports:

Research Center Blue: The research center on Oceania, this was destroyed by an alien strike, but humans are still there to regain, they keep shops and resources there in the area that they hold.
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#71
Quote:Originally posted by Garlic Jr
I didnt get anything =(

Oops! Missed you...Hmmmm....

I need you to come up with names for 4 towns for the Elementions.

Edit: One for each world, they are normally together.
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#72
Quote:Originally posted by Zarbon
Quote:Originally posted by Hell Fighter 17
So I just make one uber powerful elemental. I can choose anyone to, eh, nice. I will also make a power-up that will be special for him, if that is okay.

A power-up for the NPC? Sure, not too strong now.
Why not? I was thinking of a x40 one. He woulkd have a great big background, there would be much saga potential with him. Which I'm sure staff will notice.
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#73
Quote:Originally posted by Hell Fighter 17
Quote:Originally posted by Zarbon
Quote:Originally posted by Hell Fighter 17
So I just make one uber powerful elemental. I can choose anyone to, eh, nice. I will also make a power-up that will be special for him, if that is okay.

A power-up for the NPC? Sure, not too strong now.
Why not? I was thinking of a x40 one. He woulkd have a great big background, there would be much saga potential with him. Which I'm sure staff will notice.

If you say so!

Go ahead.
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#74
Just a suggestion, Zarbon. If you don't really want it, then no need. I just wanted to put as much as I can into my part.
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#75
Quote:Originally posted by Hell Fighter 17
Just a suggestion, Zarbon. If you don't really want it, then no need. I just wanted to put as much as I can into my part.

You may, I don't care.

But this guy will be very large, for powerups are permanent, they increase size and strength for Elementions. (AKA: x10 to all physical stats for example.)
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#76
I'll probably start on him tonite.

For power-ups, can there also be like a sub-power-up thing to it, like x5 to mental stats along with the x40 to physical stats?
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#77
Earth: Geocolous

Water: Hydrocolous

Fire: Pyrocolous

Lightning: Keraunocolous

More to come. Getting a variety to choose from...
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#78
Quote:Originally posted by Hell Fighter 17
I'll probably start on him tonite.

For power-ups, can there also be like a sub-power-up thing to it, like x5 to mental a=stats along with the x40?

No, mental stats are very precious to him, you don't have to give him stats, just make him like he has passed the sage's exceptions, and you have obtained power (x40) from him.
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#79
Nothing, i'm giving you a small job because you worked hard last time, take it as a reward.
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#80
What about the shop items...?
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