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What do you do when the world is stripped from your hands? You once had it all, you took it for less than what it really was. You let it slip by. You caused it all to go away with the cast of one line. You know you did not mean it, but words cannot be taken back. Words are infinite, never disappearing. They can make or break you. You never expect when they break you, for something is always lost, sometimes something that is of most cherishable value. Appreciate what you have, for it could be gone the next day, gone in a flash of a second. Never let it go unappreciated. What do you do next?
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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#2
If this was an actual question, I got no idea.

But otherwise, pretty good HF. The only part that kinda seemed to be choppy was when you used "break you" twice in sentences right after each other.
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Yea, I wasn't sure of that, but I was too lethargic to think of a synonym for it. Thanks, though, 20.
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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