Furiza Fiesta OOC Discussion

[Kaden]

Just so y'all know. I deleted Slug's OCB post and Ox King's OOC post.

[Alura]

Get over it, I needed a logical way to eliminate you, because your rp was not as good as the others

[James]

To put a protective spin on it Bojack, Cell, and I had a set of posts that fed off one another. Each making the other an expanded version of the last from that person's point of view then adding on the next part of the battle. What you, Ox, posted branched a completely different story off what had been written previously. No conversations, no binding with other posts, just something written based off what you wanted to go off of. Read through the other posts before hand, it'll give you an idea of the state the fight is currently in. Try and remember that if you choose to go into any quests with other people.

*double posts* cuz I can.

Edit: No you can't. n.n

No. Seriously, Cell go ahead and make you post if I don't by tonight. Once again, I've got homework thanks to my lust to be a perfect student this year... plus I'm gonna run for teh class president next year. >=D

[Sage]

Ox King,

Burter's just the judge, mmkay? He made his judgement, which was that you got eliminated. Would it have honestly made you feel better if he made you go out in some spectacular blaze of glory or if you just got kicked in the head and fell out of the ring? Either way, you're still out. =\

I don't mean to assault you or anything, but how Burter finishes the fight isn't necissarily a reflection on what he thinks about you or your writing. Sometimes he's just looking for a plausible way to conclude the match.

I mean, I, for one, don't have a grudge against you or Goten because we lost in the first round. We took a risk, and it wound up costing us. So what? Now that we've moved on, I can use the experience of the festival to make my next RPs better. Sure, I lost, but I got a chance to interact with Cell and Bojack, as well as meet up with Goten again and yourself as well.

What I'm trying to say is, even if your efforts wind up going south, you can use it to make a stronger character. Say you get killed by Frieza. Then you've got a lot of options. You could have Ox King begin doubting himself, or start a vendetta with Frieza for killing you, etc. You gotta focus on the positives.

Once again, this isn't an attack on you, kid. But look at the RPs and ask yourself this: "Where can I improve?" You're probably your own best critic. Read it over, decide where your writing is weak, and where it is strong. Focus on making your weak areas on par with your strong ones, and then build on that, y'know?

There's a lot of sources for great inspiration. I've learned quite a few little things from other people's RPs that, together, have made my RPs better than they were when I started out here (At least, I hope so. <.<;; )

Try to take it easy. This is just a game, afterall. If you can take things in stride, people will respect that, and probably go out of their way to accomodate you better. It's hard to maintain a nice composure if you explode when things don't work out, okay?

[Kaden]

Posted. C and C as anyone feels necessary.

S'all you, Goku.

[Alura]

Just so everyone knows, I got a lot of feedback for the fight Ox King was eliminated in because Cell is in my alliance. I didn't make the choice on my own

[James]

Just to add fuel to the fire, I was a member of PB a bit back. So generally the battle between Bra and Uub was every bit as fair as the others, even if Burta holds something against me for quiting. <3

Besides, Burter asks for others opinions. That should be enough. If he was a hardass and did everything the way he wanted without concent for anyone else then there would be a problem, but he's making this as fair as possible. So what say we get back to what matters, Role Playing.

Cell/Bojack: Tonight I will be home after a football game. If either of you haven't rped by then I'll do mine, then so on and so forth from there.

[Jonathan Meer]

Originally posted by Cell

What? People don't think my writing is good?

I would personally thrash the schmuck who says that.

[Hellfighter 17]

Heh, can't wait to read your post, cell, I'm in a reading mood tonight, so you should quench that thirst mighty good. =)

Originally posted by Krillin

Originally posted by Cell

What? People don't think my writing is good?

I would personally thrash the schmuck who says that.

Yea! Let's get those opinionated sonsa bicthes!

[Hellfighter 17]

I doubt they would, Cell. Both of 'em are mature people and are able to understand your point, I would believe. You were, to me, just saying that you'd like poeple to confront you rather than to Burter and than you defended Burter's integrity.

[Kaden]

Originally posted by Cell
Wow, I didn't realize how stuck up I sounded on several points.

Thumbs up for catching that.

^_^

I kid, I kid...

[Orion]

Geez, I'm glad you posted first Rad. Until I read your post and re-read Burter's, I was under the assumption that I was fighting you and Trunks. I was almost not going to bother. =p

[Kaden]

Awwwwww...

That's what I get.

[James]

Originally posted by Bojack
Nice one Cell. I'll take the next post if you don't mind Goten; it'll be up tomorrow, perhaps night if I don't come in until late.

'Course not, didn't get a chance to get on last night. =/ My school won so naturally they took off somewhere to get food after the game and I luckily knew half the team so they dragged me with them, dammit. But in any case yeah, I'll wait for it. No biggy.

[Kaden]

Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooku!!!

u needz 2 do teh poztz0rz!111

[Ander]

I think it's going great.

[Old Dave]

Cell I don't hold grudges, this is a game, a place where I come to help out and get away from my hectic life...I'm not gonna get pissed off at you and hold it over your head.

Plus your in my alliance so

[James]

Ahh... you're so awesome, Bojack. Thought I was gonna sign on this morning and have to rush before tomorrow's deadline what was I thinking?

[Orion]

Originally posted by Raditzu
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooku!!!

u needz 2 do teh poztz0rz!111

omg iz dun!11!1!

need baata 2 c hoo iz teh betta 1!1!

[Toshiro]

Originally posted by Goku

Originally posted by Raditzu
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooku!!!

u needz 2 do teh poztz0rz!111

omg iz dun!11!1!

need baata 2 c hoo iz teh betta 1!1!

baataz da b3stor!1!11!!!!1one!!