I lub teh ladies

[Alura]

I think what Furiza is trying to say is:

For rap, it's good.

[The Terminator]

Originally posted by Furiza
I don't hate rap because I've got no soul.
I hate it because it shows zero talent.

My thoughts exactly


BTW I don't wanna start an arguement...I just hate rap.

[Alura]

Then don't post.

This is for Bido to express what he feels is art. If you don't think it is, don't bother.

[Ruhiel]

If you don't want an argument, then don't say that just because we don't like rap, we don't have rhythm and we suck. Honestly? I think rap isn't music, it's rhythmical rhyming talking with a beat.

Back on topic, I'm not sure what I think about this one. As a poem, eh, I'm not so sure, I don't think it's very good as a poem. But if you worked on it some more, I would say it's could be a pretty good rap. Maybe it's because there are rhymes in some parts, and then not in others. Kinda a poem/rap mix.

[James]

Rap is just bad poetry... plain and simple.

Now, as if that was more important then the subject, you can make it better if you weren't... eh... defining the female figure as a piece of meat. Deeper things call for deeper meanings, deeper meanings call for knowing one's deeper self, knowing one's deeper self is simply knowing yourself. You won't get anywhere with poems that try and relate to other people who'll praise you for writing about a girl's thighs, those aren't the people you want to reach. When you write, write for yourself, write to express yourself. Do *not* follow along with a trend, the whole point in poetry and basically any form of art is thinking outside the box were others fear to venture because of being different from the group.

[Alura]

Warning for Goten and Kirano for contributing to the arguement I already ended.

EDIT:

And locked. Bido, feel free to start a new one, for all of your work if you wish, that isn't so cluttered

[Alura]

A thread is being made for this discussion in the Asylum.