05-29-2006, 08:13 PM
You're on the right track, but you need a couple things.
First: Your roleplay needs to be 300 words. You are on the right track, just put a little more emotion in there.
Second: We don't alow suicide or instant kill moves so you need a new move for 'Kamikaze' and Psychokinesis is a trainable technique, so you will need a new move for that one as well.
First: Your roleplay needs to be 300 words. You are on the right track, just put a little more emotion in there.
Second: We don't alow suicide or instant kill moves so you need a new move for 'Kamikaze' and Psychokinesis is a trainable technique, so you will need a new move for that one as well.
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Dante's Abyss 2007 Runner-Up

