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I figure I bin workin' on yonder
Personal Saga for some time now. 'Bin proofreading more frequently and thoroughly with more recent posts, the awkward grammatical blips will most likely be in the earlier stuff. Tell me what you like, what you don't like. Is the storyline confusing at all? Too boring? Too shallow? Lemme know what you think. If you leave some feedback, leave a link to something of yours and I'll see what I can do. You can therefore think of this as a Buu's rating centre as well.
Bra Wrote:People are dumb, essentially.
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Please?
Remember, I'll rate your stuff as well.
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I'm going to have to read this over a couple more times, because I was just confused as hell. If you can wait a bit longer, I'll give you some feedback.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
_=So wake me when it's through
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_
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I really should have mentioned in the first post instead of the most recent that it takes place in the middle of
this quest.
>_<
Bra Wrote:People are dumb, essentially.
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