Retribution C&C

[Orion]

http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=20956

If anyone was interested, I'd be very appreciative to get any C&C on my longest (and my most dedicated) storyline I've done in a long, long time.

[Kazuya]

I've kept up on this since you started it. Pretty badass storyline, but I got a couple questions I need to get clarified:

1. Koola = god, or being worshipped as a God, and the ego getting to his head?
2. Kerela, good or bad?

[Orion]

1) Koola is being worshipped as a God. He isn't one.
2) I don't know if it's any more obvious from my last two posts, but ... well, I can't tell you that.

[Jack]

I should/will read this. I always enjoyed your writing. You and Brolli were my fav staffers RP wise.