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#41
05-12-2007, 09:03 PM
Let's see how I fare
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#42
05-12-2007, 09:14 PM
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#43
05-12-2007, 10:57 PM
Dante's Abyss 2007 Sign-Ups

I'm not 100% satisfied with it, but why not.
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#44
05-12-2007, 11:04 PM
C. Good writing, I was just kinda lost. Like coming into a sequel of a movie without a recap of the first
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#45
05-12-2007, 11:08 PM
Yeah, I was going to slowly explain things as my storyline progressed. Kind of like how certain movies show a portion of the ending as the opening.
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#46
05-12-2007, 11:09 PM
Then it'll all work out as a whole, but as just one part of the movie, it doesn't work
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#47
05-13-2007, 01:37 AM
My second post in the thread.
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Quote:SpotConspiracy (11:26:20 AM): I pretty much do any saga.
SpotConspiracy (11:26:30 AM): "HELLO KITTY SAGA!? COUNT ME THE FUCK IN."
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#48
05-13-2007, 03:17 AM
New Storyline, New Post

This'll be my last one, promise =).
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#49
05-13-2007, 03:41 AM
Dante's Abyss 2007 Sign-Ups
First and current League Champion: Holder of the Torrent badge of Earth.

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Reb: ya know
Reb: I think you're a fucking moron OOC
Reb: but I have to hand it to you
Reb: you've turned into a really good writer
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#50
05-13-2007, 06:18 AM
Bujin: A

Spice: B

Retane: B-
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#51
05-13-2007, 06:35 AM
Serious?

Wow I thought it would suck because I know it hinted to my characters past and might loose some people or something.
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#52
05-13-2007, 06:38 AM
I followed it okay, it was just a little boring
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#53
05-13-2007, 06:49 AM
Well I typed it half assed drunk cuz I knew this dumb broad would want to have sex when I went to bed. I stopped in the middle because I knew I was tore up and went to bed and when I woke up atfter 2PM, I started fixing and rewriting parts and when I was about to tihnk about trying to make it real intersting I was rushed for some unknown reason. My guess is she wanted to have sex with her freind from virgina but thats a different story lol

My RP's are building up towards Retane's past since I left. You'll understand more in the Rp I'm writing.
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#54
05-14-2007, 03:16 AM
If you don't mind, wanna take a crack at my sign up?
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#55
05-14-2007, 03:34 AM
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#56
05-22-2007, 02:19 AM
Dante's Abyss 2007 Sign-Ups
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#57
05-22-2007, 02:24 AM
Grade my first post in the spar, if you will Big Grin.

Yamu vs Jeice
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#58
05-22-2007, 02:08 PM
Yamu vs. Jeice 2

If you have the time with everything going down today.
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#59
05-22-2007, 06:05 PM
Me by any chance?
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#60
05-22-2007, 06:15 PM
Bulma: B. Dialogue was hilarious but it got a little out of control. Try to read what you write out loud and see how it sounds when it spoken

Jeice: B. Good for what it was (an action post)

Yamu: A.

Raspberry: B.
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