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Character: Goku Jr.
Fighting Style: undeveloped
Planet: Earth
E-mail: peter22cool@yahoo.com
Starting Moves:

Stun: A move Goku Jr. developed to escape. It freezes the opponent for 5 minutes or until touched or hit
Kamehameha
Solar Flare

Roleplay Sample: (300 word minimum)
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The townspeople of Boulder City called it the Gold Mansion. It was general knowledge that this not-so-humble abode was home to the Novikovs'. They were a family of three; Dennis the father, his wife Olivia, and their son David (or as his parents called him Davy). It stood on a slight hill overlooking the town. Once a grassy paster for farm animals, the Novikov's had erected a white manor embroidered with gold paint. It was easily the grandest house of the small farming town, and the family made a point of keeping that way. They employed nearly half the village as cooks, butlers, cleaners, gardeners and the likes. Despite all the workers that came in contact with the Novikov's, nobody had the faintest idea of how they achieved such prosperity. It remained a mystery until the head butler, Eugene, overheard some Dennis remarking smugly about one of his investment.

"Would you like some tea, my young sir?" asked Eugene bowing deeply to get eye level with David. Eugene was bent at ninety degrees for the David's head barely reached over the marble table. He nodded vigorously and his short skinny arms gripped the teacup as soon as it was finished being poured. He lifted it to his mouth and took a large gulp. Instantly, he spewed the tea from his mouth back into the cup.

"Burned my tongue," David said his brilliant blue eyes watering in pain.

"Aw, Davey," soothed Olivia in tone fit for a toddler, "Is my poor baby okay?"

"He's fine Olivia," grunted Dennis. "A boy needs pain to learn, it's good for him." David wore an apathetic expression it was evident by his gaze toward the window that he wasn't listening to his father. "Now what was I saying," continued Dennis, "Oh, yes. My last investment has been the best so far. Blue Science Studies has already offered my Fifty Mill for that freak, I'm still waiting from International Science & Business."

Eugene ears perked up and his attention to pouring more water in Olivia's glass faded. "Eugene! You're spilling my water," exclaimed Olivia.

"I'm sorry mam," replied Eugene tersely. His mind was elsewhere, wondering what freak Dennis had invested in.

"Well thats great offer, honey," exclaimed Olivia as she turned to Dennis. "Then do you think you'll be able to spend so more time with Davey."

Davey know what was coming. "Olivia, I work so David can live in the luxury I never had when I was young," said Dennis with the same tone as if he was reciting an well rehearsed speech.

"I have to use the bathroom," lied David to escape the same fight between his parents that he heard so many times. He left the room and walked down the hall toward the bathroom, then turned sharply and headed toward the west wing of the house. For most people navigating through this house would be a nightmare. However, David had spent his whole life exploring the mansion. After an near fifteen minutes of walking he stopped before a silver door. He fumbled in his pockets as he took out key that he had long ago stolen from his father. He smiled quickly as he remembered the furious rage his father been in when he had lost the key. David opened the door and descended the spiraling staircase, until he came to his father's latest freak investment.
Their right in front of David was a thick glass cage which imprisoned a small boy. He looked ordinary with jet black spiky hair that stood up erratically, accompanied by forest green eyes. The only difference, visually, in the boy was a brown tail that wagged side to side. He looked skinny and starved, but their was no frailty in his composure, but rather a defined strength and energy emanated from his presence.

"David!" shouted the prisoner excitedly.

"Hey Goku," replied David.

"So, what's up?" asked Goku.

"I'm going to get to the point. You're going to be sold so we got to get you out of here and fast."

"But why am I going to be sold?" asked Goku. But it wasn't really a question for they both knew exactly why he was being sold. A tangible orb of cobalt blue light materialized in one of Goku's hand and he moved it around the cage before slamming it into the glass imprisonment without even cracking the glass. The boys stood in silence, each plotting away to escape.

"We'll find a way, I know it," David exclaimed.
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#2
I'm sorry but Goku Jr. was already applied for, but feel free to look for another character you may be interested in. An updated list is here: http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=108
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#3
Can i be uub also do i have to write another rp or does it not matter
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#4
Actually that would be great, and make it of Uub.
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Uub was hunched over, his hands press right above his bony knee caps. Each vertebrate of his spin jutted out through his thin dirty shirt. He took labored raspy breaths and with a quick fleeting look over a bleeding shoulder he sat down. He carefully maneuvered to the ground without putting in pressure on his wounded shoulder. With his good arm, Uub slipped off his dirty ratty shirt that had adorned him for what felt like months straight and wrapped it tightly over his equally filthy skin. He pulled chunks of mud from his black mohawk. The thought of cleanliness was a distant as the star in the sky. Ubb, shirtless, felt the harsh bite of cold air. It was a windy night with only a sliver of the moon. In the darkness of a forest Ubb looked at the sky with two round pleading eyes. How he longed for warmth and shelter, but most of all food. His stomach grumbled at the thought.

"Don't think of food," Ubb commanded himself, but his mind did not obey. At the thought of chicken tikka masala, hot, right of the oven naan, the small indian boy's stomach growled again this time more vigorously. Then the sounds of footsteps of fresh crisp fallen leaves crackled through the air. Fear of being caught reminded Ubb why was he was here, why he was bleeding, and what he had to do. He hurriedly jumped to his feet and cupped his gnarly abnormally large hands together despite the pain he suffered from moving his arm. His palms near his side he bent low and peered toward where the sound came from.

Two dark silhouettes walked in unison each holding a menacing rifles. Although their faces were masked by darkness, Uub knew who they were. He was in no shape to fight their ki guns for the second time that day. He need rest desperately. He instinctively mutter, "Solar Flare." And a blinding light materialized and bathed forest in a golden hue. And with a flickering silver aura Uub burst into the sky. He kept scanning the sky for his pursuers, expecting a sudden attack. Nobody came and Uub was safe, or so he thought.
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#6
Ok, that was good Smile. About the stun move, I'm gonna have to say it's a bit too powerful. Perhaps make it more of a daze, where the target is dazed for a few moments so you can escape.

Your roster is here: http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=22405
You can train every sunday here: http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=109

Make sure you make a character vault and put it in the update board Smile.
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