For 18

[Old Captain Silver]

Trying a new style. Made this cause I had not made one for 18 yet and I felt like doing so. C&C please?

[Android-18]

Don't like the RagBlack text.

I think the girl is pretty.

The cross makes me think of religion xD.

I think you did a pretty good job of it, thanks.

[Old Captain Silver]

Yeah, I need a better font for the seconddary text >.<

And thanks for your comments! ^_^

[Android-18]

It's the glow. Try to use white or black, not yellow.

[Old Captain Silver]

Oh, well it was white >.< Because it is small, it looks yellow, I guess