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Round 1 - Krillin vs Toma
#1
Scenerio - You're a teenager hanging out at a popular arcade when a gang shooting happens in right front of you.

Assignment - Roleplay yourself in first person while witnessing this murderous act. Before, during, and after.

Rules - The victim must die. That's the only rule.


You have FIVE DAYS from this post to PM me your product. Put both your name and your oppenent in the subject
#2
I have received Toma's.
#3
TOMA

Lights went off in front of me. I could read some text on a screen. ?High Scores?, it read. I was in an arcade, gladly playing my games, trying to beat the top ten. Concentrated on the game, I didn?t notice that a crowd had gathered around me. The lights on the game lit up as I reached the half-way mark. I was next to a wall, looking to my right, I could see the door and windows. They were massive.

Giant pieces of glass, held together by some pieces of metal. Looking back at my game, I saw that I had broken it, sort of. The fighting game had crashed, the opponent was not able to move, and he was losing 1 health point every second or so. He had thousands, so I thought I could just wait that much. Little did I know what was about to happen. The crowd had dispersed, most people calling me, ?Cheater?, ?Hack?. I didn?t mind. After all, it?s the professional gamer?s job to abuse bugs to win easier.

Looking around, I saw that most people even left the arcade, looking at me with a frown through the windows. The arcade was called, ?The flashing lights?. It was a good name for it. The games had so many bulbs stuck on their sides that would just flash on and off, that you could even think you were going to faint. I looked at the windows again. Smoke and dust shot up from the road. I was startled; I jumped up, looking carefully. ?Maybe the games are making me a bit paranoid.?, I thought as I turned to the game. Almost a third of the opponent?s life had disappeared.

I looked at the windows again. I could see a car, but the dust and smoke had risen around it, not letting me see. I saw two people walking out, wearing bandanas, and having a bulk in their pockets. At that time, I knew I had to hide. I witnessed another gang-job like this years back. I was almost shot, but I couldn?t let it happen again. Looking through the corner of my eye at them, I could tell they were looking for someone. I tried to figure out whom, but it was in vain. Strangely enough, one of the guys pointed to the right of me. I was frozen. I couldn?t move any more. My body had become numb. I felt I was going to die.

At my right, a grown-up was playing a very old game, which looked like Mario. I tried to leave, but my legs wouldn?t budge. I tried to say something, but my mouth was frozen in fear. I turned to my left, and started to walk, limping a bit while I went to the window. I looked back at the screen of my game. The opponent?s life had depleted by half already.

Looking to the right, I could see the guys reaching in their pockets. At the entry, there were two couches. I dived through the air, landing behind one. In my pocket, I had my trusty camera. ?An amateur journalist should always be prepared.?, the teachers told me. I lifted my hand, shivering once in a while. I could see them talking, the gang reaching into their pockets deeper and deeper. I looked at them. They frowned once, and then their expression turned to an evil smile as they took out guns from their pockets, shooting the man. I was shocked. The people in the arcade shot to the ground, looking in fear at the attackers. In a moment of fear, my hand shivered as I looked at my game. The life of the opponent was almost gone.

I looked at them leaving, shooting a glass or too, trying to make us scared. As they sped off in their car, I jumped out from under the sofa, lunging at the wounded man. He was shot in the chest multiple times. I knew he was going to die. I was starting to cry. I couldn?t do anything, and he was almost dead. It didn?t matter he was a stranger. If only I could have had the power to do something, if onl-- The man interrupted me. ?Don?t worry, I have no fear of dying, I knew my life was to be taken away today. That?s why I came here, and played the game I loved most.? The man smiled, as he passed away. My game, at this moment, had started yelling and flashing lights. I had made the high-score I was looking for.

I looked at the game, and then turned around. Everyone was on the ground, afraid they might be seen, not knowing they left. ?Get up people, they left. Call an ambulance, now! You, call the police. We need to try to save this man.? I started to wait at his side. I knew he was dead, but the people didn?t know that.

The police and ambulance came. They started questioning me, trying to make me remember if I knew that man. I told them he looked familiar, but I couldn?t tell where I seen him. A police car came, flashing the red and blue lights, letting the siren yell. I looked in the back. There were the two gang members, locked up, and crying. I asked the officer why they did that. ?Because they thought it was fun.?

I was incredibly angry. I couldn?t stand it, because I knew that they killed a man, for pleasure. I turned around, letting the car leave. I looked up, and it hit me. I talked to the police man, or at least, tried to talk. I pointed my hand up towards a bill-board. That man was the head of the local gaming company. They had released the first game many years back, and it was the same the man was playing.

I knew what I had to do. When I returned home, the first thing I did was to open up my old computer, connect to the net and download some programming tutorials. Since then, I?ve learned a lot, and I still am learning. But I can?t forget the man who died that day, sadly.
#4
KRILLIN

It was simple. I was meant to kill a young man with a loose mouth. There had been a few remarks made that Griff didn?t take so kindly to, and he wanted the guy muffled. Somehow or another (I can never quite figure out how he knows these things), Griff figured that our soon-to-be-dead acquaintance was a regular at the local nerd haven. I was all set to head in, do the job (discreetly, of course), and get out. It?s a big city, and as long as I covered my tracks, Griff said, I?d be fine. ?Course, it was the threat that I wouldn?t be fine if I didn?t do the job that got me goin?.

The choice for the murder was easy. A gun would be too obvious and easy to track. A knife would be much more covert, but that wasn?t quite my style. I?m a thinker. Always have been, always will be. And, though some of those fuckers would laugh afterwards, my blade was an icicle salvaged from the junk kept in the upper room. A bit of tinkering with a fridge, a cooler, and a quick entry was all I needed to have the job done. The icicle would melt soon enough when left in the guy?s neck, and the police certainly wouldn?t give a small cold-basket too much thought.

And so, I made my way to the arcade, and I immediately found my suspect dancing to one of those foreign music things. A shame, I had thought, that he would make himself so obvious.

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I was surprised. Out of nowhere, came the blood. With the blood, came panic. With the panic, came confusion. But amidst it, I saw what had happened.

Someone else had beaten me to it. Whoever had done the deed left their weapon lodged in the victim?s neck. On a closer glance (which I made trying to keep as ordinary and casual as possible), I froze at the sight. An icicle, melting beside the young man?s windpipe. I glanced down at my cooler, just to make sure all of my devices were in their proper place. They were. Again I looked up, but there was no chance of finding the attacker amidst the flurry. The killing had taken place, but I had not moved.

Odd.

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The proof was undeniable. Someone else had killed this young man, with the exact same plan as my own. Someone had practically mirrored my plans. And, in a lapse of stupidity, I simply sat there, dumbfounded.

That?s how the police found me. The contents of my cooler were questioned. Thankfully, the icicle I had planned to use had melted by that time, but they considered the ice-box evidence enough, and kept me detained. So, here I wait, left with nothing but a few sheets of paper and a pen I stole from the desk on the way here. It?s times like this that one questions one?s loyalties.

Until, of course, that same person realizes that their loyalty is kept under death. Griff always was a hasty fellow. They?ll probably lock me up, putting a decisive end to the greatest irony I?ve ever been confronted with. But I won?t talk. Damn them, they can?t make me talk.
#5
C&C welcome
#6
Well, a personal comment on mine: It was the hardest I've ever had to work to pump out such a small piece. I've found that, though first-person is fun to play with and such, it is a pain in the royal hiney.
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#7
Damn. This is a lot closer then I had anticipated. ;_;
#8
Quote:Originally posted by Krillin
Well, a personal comment on mine: It was the hardest I've ever had to work to pump out such a small piece. I've found that, though first-person is fun to play with and such, it is a pain in the royal hiney.

Comment on mine. First-person is the easiest I've tried so far =o I could've put more thought into it, and would have ended with 5 pages.....but I didn't have the time. Meh.



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A decade ago, I never thought I would be, at twenty-three, on the verge of spontaneous combustion. Woe-is-me.
#9
KRILLIN

OVER

TOMA

A LOT closer then people may think. Toma really gave Krillin a run for his money


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