RPsville

[Sage]

Uh... what the hell?

Ginyu, I'm pretty sure he's asking for C&C. For his RP. O.o;

[Aero]

I am honestly getting tired of hearing you talk so low about yourself.

EDIT by Rad: Then PM him about it. Don't spam the Discussion forum.

[Piccolo Daimoun]

*Kicks*

For the record, I just read your first post cause I'm strapped for time.

I like how you have KV lost in his own thoughts as you RP. I've always thought it was kinda neat to keep 3rd person, but allow your character to kinda seep into it, if you can understand my rambling. O.o

The way you do dialogue is pretty cool too, and flows well.

Although, I suggest that next time you explain how the employee's only area was so expensively furnished. *Shrug*

Great roleplay though. Glad you're back, and don't be leaving again.

[Piccolo Daimoun]

*Kick x2*

You're right. It was funnier. Not much to say here.

Although, once again, I had no clue exactly where they were, or what it looked like. I think it would be cooler if you worked it in. Although, I love how you can work comedy into your posts.

[Chase]

Just read it. Awesome.

I love how you blend in comedy, and manage to do it, without disrupting the action.

I haven't really seen any grammar errors.

I also love the story. Not much more I can say. =)