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Haven't asked for C&C in a while, so I thought I'd get some. I'm sure Bardock wouldn't say no either. Try to be as in-depth as possible, and if you leave a link, I'll try and do the same for you. Might be a month's delay between you posting and me C&Cing, but I won't forget you - I'll get to it sooner or later.
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Nice last post. Good ending.
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Do you guys object to someone not me grading your fight?
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I can't speak for Bardock, but I don't mind. I actually expected it to be Hellfighter, since you're focusing on the pyramid/dungeon updates, though I'm not entirely sure if he's still helping run the saga. If someone else wants to do it, I'm cool.
It just occured to me that if y'all haven't been following my story, you might not 'get' that last post. So if you don't know who Zanshin is, just know that he got killed in TMW2. And like, Buu stole his armour for metal. >_>
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I get it Supes. It's okay. That's why it was cool.
And I don't object to anyone who might be grading the fight. I just wanna see the result. o_o
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Last post was crazy, Gregorio Sanchez. I liked the comparisons of the two fighters' punches to the stick of dynamite and a wrecking ball. Very descriptive.
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Yeah. I think he pretty much killed me with that last post. Damn.
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Quote:Originally posted by Super Buu
I actually expected it to be Hellfighter, since you're focusing on the pyramid/dungeon updates, though I'm not entirely sure if he's still helping run the saga. If someone else wants to do it, I'm cool.
I'm still trying to "reintegrate" myself back into the updating scene; so far it seems hazy for me, but unless Rad asked someone else to do it, I'll gladly grade.
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I love you, Heffers. <3
And don't be gettin' all modest, Bar. Everybody knows how hard you rock when it comes to writing.
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Quote:Originally posted by Hellfighter 17
but unless Rad asked someone else to do it, I'll gladly grade.
She's all yours.
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Quote:Originally posted by Super Buu
I love you, Heffers. <3
I think it's actually pretty close. I really liked your description, things like the "wrecking ball" and "dynamite" references Sel mentioned. Also, turning Super Buu into chewing gum is pretty funny. I can just picture that in my head. What really got me was the Zanshin part, but only because I've been following your saga. It has a little bit of a Twenty vibe to it, but enough to be completely independent. I dig the whole "my strength is your strength" thing more than an alternate personality or some strange spirit using the character as a host body for no good reason other than to make them insane.
However, know that Bardock will always look cooler. I mean, what does Supes have? A donkey shlong on his head. ^_^
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I tried to make him cool by turning him into a cyborg. =(
My favourite part was just the 'being ripped in two' thing, though. I realised afterwards that it was probably 'cause I still had a hardon from that Hulk Vs. Wolverine fight. The 'dynamite' was also a reference to Bardock's explosive fists, though it wasn't really overt.
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Yeah, I'm dumb. Didn't catch the dynamite reference. But now that I know I can appreciate the brilliance.
Actually, Supes looked very cool as a cyborg. It had that whole "Terminator" mangled feel, except without the sucky graphics or the cheesy connotation. I think it would be fun to roleplay as a character that has the same properties as Silly Putty.
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I loved that cyborg idea, SB, and I am anxious to see how it plays out in the ending post; I am also anxious for your decision. The person who was talking to him before teh last post really had me itchin'.
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Just wait for the rematch.
Oh you betta believe there's gonna be a rematch.
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All my base are belong to you two. Fucking awesome.
EDIT: Also, SB...don't be too nice with yoru decision. Remember, Bardock's not gonna hold it against you if you kill him, and there's not nearly enough death around nowadays.
But then again, do what SB would really want done to Bardock, IC. Not just what would please the readers.
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The outcome is already decided. I'd like to write it up tonight, but I have to get up in six hours, and tomorrow I'm meeting my family for lunch and then going out with friends. >_< We'll see.
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Would you object to me making a poll, anyway, SB? I think it'd be neat.
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You can if you want. Perhaps, since I'm gonna be busy tomorrow (and I really need to be sleeping now >_>), I could PM you my answer and then you could write the conclusion. I don't wanna hold up Bardock any more than I already have.
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If I get the drive, I will. I have a half-day tomorrow, so I will have more time than usual.
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