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8.1
This is simply going off of your work as SB/Kenshin, as I'm sorry to say I haven't really followed your "escapades" as Celipa here. You're good, and can be outstanding at times, but I always wished you would show more of a connection between thought and action in your roleplays, then they'd be amazing.
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9.0
You're genius in roleplaying form. Seriously. Your work at crafting out the individual personalities of your character is astounding. You've taken Twenty in a whole new direction, past the cheesy schizophrenia cliche that too many try to do. I love it, I love roleplaying with you, and I hope you don't leave. =D
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8.5
You're one of the few people who I kept track of during the many years of watching the boards before joining. Your work is good, sometimes great, and it's never boring. Good job.
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Krillin - 8.7 - I love your work as Krillin. As others, eh, I've seen you do better. But "Surviving the Wild", your Spiritken training...that was amazing. You've done some awesome things here, and I hope you continue to. You break some of the monotony, you and Twenty. You really do. I loved to see GMC as the underdogs, who, even though they couldn't go SSJ29013812938-1 and pwn everyone, they still tried and made a name for themselves. At least you were tight-knit.
Keep on truckin'.
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Bujin - 9.5
You're pretty much my favorite writer, and I've told you this before. I dunno what flaws others see in your writing, but it's humorous, keeps me entertained, and like I told you before...if you wrote a book, I would buy it. Your...less than massive amount of work with Bujin was good. But you shine as Zidane.
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6.5
I've read some of your quests, and although they can be a good read, need to be a little more fleshy. You were so determined to get kaioken, and thats what I like to see.
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9.0
Your work is quite good Pan, I remember reading your stuff back in the Takeover saga as Olibu, and it had me begging for more. You certainly deserve this rating. =)
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6.0
You're a work in progress, Panbuukin. That said, you have got nowhere to go but up in the months to come man, so by all means, don't ever be afraid to ask for some assistance or advice in the future. Keep up the good work and you'll just keep going places.
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8.5 - 9
Your work is very good and keeps my interest.
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The work I have recently read of yours is amazing and I'm glad to have ya in FD ^_^
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7.0
You haven't done anything overwhelmingly awesome lately due to your bout of MIA, but I must say that your Spiritken training was quite an intriguing and enjoyable read. I await the day that you return to active writing once more.
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8.75
i would have to agree with what Bun said. Everything that i have read of yours was very good and has kept my interest.
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6.5
You're one of those people who are good, and have the potential to be better. You have some grammar issues at times, but that'll change in time. Keep it up. =D
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6.5
Almost the same reasons you gave to Paragus. The potential is there and your RPs are good, but they don`t especially excel in any regard. You also seem to sometimes tend to rush things too much. Otherwise, you have all the basis needed to become a excellent writer. All you need is practice and experience.
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8.25
i personally enjoy your Kaoken training. Im not too familiar with your other stuff but from what i see in those quests you are an excellent writer. Keep up the good work.
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6.5
You're in that stage where you've been spitting out quality work. You just need to write as different characters on other sites and work on versatility.
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11!
Sorry, jk. Here's what I really think...
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The work I have recently read of yours is amazing and I'm glad to have ya in FD ^_^
I'm not quoting just to be lazy, but because this is how I feel your score should be and etc. Ok, I am doing it to be lazy.
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Geez, since everyone else is going like 3 or 4 times, I might as well do it too.
Koola - 6
You seem to have moments of good description and then others are just average at best. I think you have potential, though. I honestly had to read one of your latest RPs to even see you're writing. You're definitely not the worst RPer I've seen.
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8.5
I can't really fault your writing, although sometimes the length puts me off reading it at times.
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I'd give you like a 7ish...
I like your writing alot and cant realy say much about it...at least I cant think of anything right now...if I do then I'll let you know
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7
Acouple of months ago I would have given you a 5, but you've improved dramatically in a really short space of time, keep it up.
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