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Android 20: 9.5
I love your writing, as it as a enchanting thrall behind it. Not only that but it draws the reader in to the point where when they are done reading they want you to post again.
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7.5
I really enjoy your writing but I still see some room to grow.
Edit: BTW your better than me and I enjoyed RPing with you a lot
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Vegeta: 9
I have only read one of your posts, but what I read was something that was very exceptional. Some posts can drag on and on for all eternity to the point where you just want to scream, but yours don't do that. They are almost perfect the way they are.
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Akane: 8
You write out an easy read without losing the flair that keeps interest. I won't add a noob appraisal comment, because you're quite a way off and, yeah. Definitely a must read.
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6.5
That fight we had was badass, and there was time when I was like "I hope that dern changeling doesn't kill me >=/ =(" All I can say that sticks out to me as something you can work on is that your paragraphs were pain on the eyes, and some of your choices in modifiers (adjectives, adverbs for example) made the writing more confusing then it had to be and hindered the flow of your writing as a by-product.
Quote:Vad's Whimsical Whimsicalisms: Men. Good stuff there.
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but anyone can start today and make a new ending.
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8.0
To be honest, I'd only mostly read your Squirtle/Wartortle posts until yesterday, and it's kind of amazing how much your characters differ. Your posts flow nicely, and they almost never get boring. I don't have any problems with 17, but your Wartortle posts can be kind of...over the edge, which isn't my style.
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(I don't think I've rated you yet.)
9.0
Well, I consider you to be just about Ben's (Recoome's) equal. You both have your moments. As Bujin, you haven't really capture me much, bust as Zidane, it's grade-A work. It is very interesting and has a beautiful flow to it as well.
Placed 3rd in Dante's Abyss 08
8.679
Well, from the work I've read... you have your ups and downs like everyone. So I'm not rating the bad stuff as much as I'm congratulating the good work. It's very good, and I enjoy reading it! ^_^
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5. I haven't been reading much but I looked at a couple you made so thats the result.
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I'll give you a 5.5 You seem to skip to doing things without .,..idk how to describe it I'm talking to you on msn anyway so ill just let you know
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Hmmm....tough...I'd say around 7 you've improved alot since we've started, we all have (Jeice, Para, Yamcha meaning all...not everyone on the site.) But there are still some things that can be improved
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7.5
I've been working with you in the saga(somewhat), and have found your writing to be far above average. Keep it up.
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get AIDS then fuck a deer and kill it with my AIDS." - Louis C.K.
thanks waff
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7.5 i enjoy your writing, keep it up.
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9-9.5
One of my favorite writers, whether your a big reptile, a tiny reptile, or a man running around in green spandex, I enjoy your writing.
Quote:Vad's Whimsical Whimsicalisms: Men. Good stuff there.
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but anyone can start today and make a new ending.
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Quote:Originally posted by Burter
10. One the best.
10. He makes me ejaculate with glee.
Android 17 - 8. I've always liked his stuff quite a bit.
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IC: 9.5
Phenomenal...when he roleplays.
OOC: 10.
Mal Nova Wrote:I do apologize for using the word rape. There are four separate definitions for the word rape, two of which describe vegetation...
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9.5
One of this board's best, clearly.
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8.5 Fantastic. Love the reads.
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8.5
When you want to, you can be one of the best. However, your character troubles keep me from putting you atop my "ZOMG, THESE GUYS ARE AWESOME!!!!ONE" list.